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Year 2006 (49 years later)

There was a faint sound of crushing gravel as the little blue car pulled to a stop in the small parking lot.  An aging man got out of the driver’s side.  He was extremely tall and well built for his age, and his hair was cut short and in varying shades of gray.  A thick matching moustache adorned his slender, kindly face.  Square glasses were perched on his nose. He reached back into the car, pulled out a simple mahogany cane, and with its help made his way over to the other side of the car.

He opened the passenger door and helped a young girl out of the car.  This girl was fifteen years old, and skinny and straight as a twig.  Her face was also slender like the man’s, albeit much younger and more feminine.  Shoulder length, sunflower blonde hair was swept up into a ponytail.  She wore a simple white t-shirt and blue jeans, with flip-flops on her feet. Her hands were covering her eyes.

She half-stumbled out of the car, still keeping her eyes shut and covered.

“Ok, you can open your eyes now Maddy,” the old man said finally.

The girl moved her hands slowly to reveal big, sky blue eyes.  She scanned what was in front of her, and a big smile slowly stretched across her face.  

They were standing in front of a small building with white siding.  A small flowerpot rested on the windowsill outside, and there was a friendly “Welcome!” sign on the door. Above the door was another sign that read “Mapleview Animal Shelter”.

Maddy’s eyes sparkled happily.  She looked up at the man.

“Really, Grandpa?” she asked quietly.

The old man nodded happily, and Maddy bounded towards the door.  She was so excited she could hardly contain it, the smile on her face stretching from ear to ear.

A bell above the door gave a small, cheery jingle as it opened and Maddy walked inside.  The front office was small, but in a cozy kind of way.  An empty reception desk sat on the far side of the room, and a few mismatched chairs were scattered along the apple red walls.  There were several posters with phrases such as “Adopt Me!” and “Take Me Home Today!” on them.

Maddy wondered what sort of pet she should get.  She already had it narrowed down to a cat or a dog, and was quickly weighing the pros and cons of each.  Dogs were friendly and playful and easier to train, but required a lot more attention and were often slobbery and messy.  A cat would be able to take care of mice and were quieter and cleaner, but cats don’t usually like to cuddle or play as much as a dog.  Such a decision!

As these thoughts were rolling through Maddy’s head, a man suddenly came through the door behind the desk.  A warm smile appeared on his face when he saw Maddy, but Maddy instantly looked down at the floor when she saw him.

“Hello young lady!” the man greeted her.  “Are you here to adopt, or just look today?”

Maddy stared at her toes as she fumbled for an answer.  Her mind seemed to have gone blank all of a sudden, and she instantly went into panic mode.  “Um…. Uh…I’m here… to….” Her eyes shifted back and forth.  

Another ring of the bell above the door was her savior as her grandfather walked in.  She was instantly half-hiding behind him, still not making eye contact with the confused man behind the desk.

“He asked if we were adopting or just looking today,” she whispered in his ear.

Her grandfather nodded knowingly and approached the man behind the desk.  Maddy was still half-walking, half-hiding behind him, eyes shifting between the floorboards and the man.

“Hey, how’re ya doing?” her grandfather cheerily asked the man as they shook hands.

“None too shabby, none too shabby…” the man returned, clearly glad to be rid of the awkward moment between him and Maddy.  “Sorry to have kept your girl waiting here, I was just helping a few boys in the back.  What can I help you with today?”

Maddy’s grandpa rested his hands on her shoulders.  “Well, we’re hoping we can find Maddy here a friend.”

“Ahh, then you’ve come to the right place! Lord knows these critters need a friend as well.”  The man smiled at Maddy, who finally managed a to offer tiny smile back.

The man motioned towards the hallway he came from.  “If you go down this hallway, you’ll find the cats in the room on the left and dogs on the right.  Let me know if you find one you like, ok?”

Maddy nodded shyly and started speed walking down the hall.  She was really relieved to be by herself, half because she wanted time to pick out her pet, and half because she was able to get away from that stranger.

Back in the waiting room, Maddy’s grandpa sighed and shook his head.  “I’m really sorry about that,” he told the man.  “She’s just shy and doesn’t have very good… social skills… for some reason.  It’s been that way since elementary school.  That’s actually why we’re here.  I’m hoping a pet will help her to open up a bit.”

The man waved it off.  “Hey, don’t worry about it. Not everyone can be the world’s biggest extrovert, right?  Anyway, I’m sure a pet will do her a world of good if it’s a friend she needs.”

Maddy’s grandpa sighed again and looked down the hallway at Maddy’s diminishing form.  “Yeah.  That girl really does need a friend...” he mumbled sadly.

Maddy entered the room on the left, the one with the cats.  Instantly a barrage of meows and purrs hit her full force.  She couldn’t believe how many cats there were!  There must have been over 30 cats in that room!  Each one had it’s own ‘cage’, which were stacked up on top of each other along the walls.  Cats of every kind were there: fluffy, shorthaired, spotted, striped, white, black… Maddy didn’t even know where to begin looking.  But she figured the left side was as good a place as any to start.

As she looked through the cats, she quickly found out that choosing a pet was harder than it looks.  Each cat is so adorable!  And I haven’t even got to the dogs yet!  How will I be able to narrow my choice down to one? she thought as she looked at each one.  Occasionally she stuck her fingers into the cages to try to pet a particularly cute kitty.  One eagerly licked her finger. Maddy giggled gleefully at the rough texture of the tongue.

She finished up with the cat room, and made a list of her favorites in her head.  Heading into the dog room, she noticed that she wasn’t alone.  Three boys about her age were all gathered around a small pen in the center of the room.  Maddy couldn’t see what was in the pen, but she decided to avoid the boys if she could.  So she started making her way around the outside of the room, where all the dogs were kept in one long unit surrounding the room.

This room was considerably noisier than the cat room.  If a dog wasn’t barking, it was panting, growling, or whining.  Most of them came bounding up to Maddy on the other side of the cage, sticking their noses through the wire and pining for attention.  Maddy tried her best to give each of them a pat on the head and beamed when their tails wagged in response.  Already she was beginning to lean towards the dogs instead of the cats.

Suddenly a loud, ear-piercing yelp made her jump and wheel around.  She found the source of the noise in the hands of one of the boys, and also discovered what was in the small pen in the middle of the room.

There were about seven golden retriever puppies in the pen, all about eight weeks old.  Most of them were playing with each other, but one of them was being held by the scruff of the neck.  He didn’t seem to be enjoying it at all.  Maddy watched as the boy grabbed onto one of the puppy’s ears and pulled it outward like Dumbo’s.

“Look, it’s Batdog!” the boy exclaimed.  The other boys laughed, oblivious to the puppy’s whining and squirming.

Maddy hesitated, then slowly approached the boy with the puppy and tapped his shoulder. “Um… I don’t think… you should holditlikethat…” Maddy barely breathed out the last few words.

“Oh come on,” the boy said impatiently. “We’re just having a bit of fun. Now get lost, will you?”

Maddy thought for a minute, then slowly backed away.  The last thing she wanted was a fight, and besides, it wasn’t like the puppy was going to die, right?  Let the boys have their fun…  So she went back to looking at the older dogs.

“Look, I can make him be Superman!” she heard the boy say behind her.  She turned to see the puppy being held with his forelegs and back legs held out like Superman and being “flown” through the air with swooshing noise effects by the boy.  The puppy was whining softly.

Maddy turned away, trying to calm the small bubble of anger in her chest.  I’m sure the boys will go away soon… Don’t start something with them… It’s not worth it…”

But as she continued her way around the room, looking at dogs along the way, the puppy’s small yelps and whimpers slowly made that bubble grow bigger.  Like a snowball down a hill, the more the puppy whimpered, the angrier Maddy felt.  She closed her eyes and bit her lip, trying to calm herself down.  It’s not worth it, it’s not worth it, it’s not wor-

All of a sudden the puppy let out a series of ear-piercing yelps, the loudest it had made.  The bubble in Maddy’s chest reached its breaking point and burst.

And before Maddy knew what she was doing, she ran up to the boy with the puppy and shouted, her voice shrilly, “I SAID YOU’RE NOT SUPPOSED TO HOLD IT LIKE THAT!” And in one swift motion she shoved him to the ground.

She reached down and snatched the still-whimpering puppy from him, cradling it against her chest.  “What the hell?!” the boy shouted.  “What gives?!”

But Maddy was suddenly silent, looking between the retriever puppy and the boy, mouth opening and closing like a fish out of water.  Had she really just done that?  Her, Maddy?  Her blue eyes were wide as plates.  Then she suddenly ran from the room before the boy could get to his feet.

“Hey! Get back here!” the boy shouted.  Maddy ignored him and ran back out to the first room, where her grandpa and the other man were waiting.  Their faces turned to mild shock when they saw Maddy’s wide eyes and the puppy in her arms.

“There’re boys back there and one of them was holding this puppy wrong and he was whimpering and hurting and so I pushed him down and took the puppy away and it’s not my fault!”  She gasped for air, having said that sentence very fast and in one breath.

Her grandpa and the man looked at each other in confusion for a moment, but then the three boys from the dog room came out, each looking mad as a rabid hound.

Maddy instantly scurried behind her grandfather, still holding the puppy.  “That’s them. The boy in the middle was the one hurting the puppy,” she mumbled softly, pointing at them from behind her grandpa.

The man looked at the three boys sternly.  “Is that true, boys?”

“I wasn’t hurting it!  It was just a bit of fun!” the boy growled.  “Sure, it was whining a bit but –“

The man held up his hand to silence the kid.  “That’s enough.  I think it’s time you boys left, don’t you think?”  He motioned towards the door.  His eyebrows were furrowed and a frown was on his face.

The three boys all looked at each other for a moment, then the one in the middle scoffed.  “Fine.  It wasn’t much fun here anyway.”  They all silently slinked out the door and down the gravel road.

The man sighed and rubbed the inner corners of his eyes.  “Those boys won’t be coming back here again, I’ll be sure of that.  Thank you, Maddy. You did the right thing,” he said gently.

Maddy smiled and looked down at the puppy in her arms.  His fur was reddish brown, darker than most retrievers.  He looked back up at her with deep, round eyes the color of chocolate.  They were sparkling.

She brought him up to her face to get a better look, holding him under the armpits. He gave a happy little bark and licked her nose.  She giggled softly.

“Well, are you going to go back and look some more?” her grandpa asked.

Maddy stared at the puppy a little more, scrunching up her lips as she thought.  Then she finally said, “Nope, I like this one.”

The man behind the desk smiled. He reached under the desk and pulled out a few papers. “Alright young lady. I’ll just need you to sign here, and I’ll also need your guardian to sign too.”

Maddy handed her new puppy over to the man as she signed her full name: Maddy Toddson.  

She handed the pen over to her grandfather and he signed his own name: William Toddson.

“And I’m sorry to put you on the spot like this, but you’ll have to think of a name for him right now so I can put it on his papers,” the man said as he took the signed papers back.

Maddy was a little taken aback. She had been so busy thinking about what animal she should get that naming it never even crossed her mind!  She quickly scanned the room, looking for inspiration.  Flowerpot, chair, desk, poster… None of them were even remotely good names, or even names at all.  Then her eyes came across the nametag pinned to the man’s plaid shirt.

It read: “Hello, my name is Riley.”

“Riley,” she said softly, slowly, listening to how it sounded out loud.  “Yeah, Riley. That’s his name.”

The man behind the desk raised an eyebrow and chuckled. Maddy flushed and quickly blurted out, “I’m sorry, I can change it if you want…”

“No, no. I think Riley’s a nice name,” the man said a bit smugly.  “I’m just glad you didn’t choose a showy name like ‘PopTart's Momentary Lapse of Reason Concrete Hullabaloo.”  That got a shy chuckle out of Maddy.

The man handed the papers to Grandpa William, gave Maddy her puppy, and sent them on their way with a friendly wave.  “I hope you and your new friend enjoy many wonderful years together,” he called warmly.

Out in the parking lot, Maddy was scratching Riley on the top of his head when she noticed something sparkle in the gravel.  She looked down and saw a necklace.  She had seen it before, but it was always on her grandpa’s person.  Most of the necklace was silver, but within a small “cage” hanging off the chain was a small gem.  It appeared to be a perfectly round opal, but it was the most beautiful opal Maddy had ever seen.  Depending on the light, it appeared to contain all the colors known to man and more.  It truly was remarkable.

Maddy picked it up and brought it over to her grandpa, who was unlocking the car.  “You dropped your necklace, Grandpa,” she told him, holding it out in her hand.

Her grandpa instantly went stiff.  His eyes widened slightly and he snatched the necklace from Maddy fast as lightning.  He turned around and seemed to whisper something to it, but Maddy couldn’t make out the words.  After putting the necklace in his pocket, Grandpa William turned back to Maddy, who cringed, thinking she did something bad.

Instead his expression softened.  He made a small smile and said, “Thank you, Maddy.  That would’ve been bad if we’d left it here.  But I’m going to have to ask you not to touch that necklace again, ok?  I…I think it’s best if I just hang on to it.”

Maddy was a bit confused, but nodded slowly, agreeing not to touch the strange necklace again.  

Soon the incident was forgotten as they made their way back home in their little blue car.  But now they had a new member of the family. William hoped dearly that he would be a good influence to Maddy.  But as he saw her laughing and scratching Riley’s tummy in the passenger seat, he smiled.  He didn’t think he had anything to worry about.
Chapter one yaaaay! And yes, Maddy named her dog after the man she met at the shelter. xD She's just that uncreative.

But really, Riley was named by a little girl I babysit. I was working on a drawing of him as a dog and she asked what his name was. I said I wasn't sure yet, so she told me I should name him Riley because that was her old golden retriever's name (he'd died a few years back). So I did. ^__^

I also like the character Riley from National Treasure. xD But that hardly has anything to do with it.

I named the leading girl Maddy because I was angry at Disney for changing the princess's name in Princess and the Frog. I like Tiana, but I think it's MAJORLY retarded that they changed her name just because some insecure pricks thought the name was racist. So I named my main character Maddy in an act of rebellion. |D

AND I TOTALLY FOUND MADDY AND RILEY'S THEME SONG. [link] The moment I started listening to it, it just clicked. I can just picture it as a recurring theme whenever a tender moment happens in the story. :love: And believe me, there will be plenty of touching, cheesy moments. Oh yes. Full of cheese.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy chapter one.
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SonicShell25 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
So, you named your character after someone you knew? That's cool. I did the same thing when my named the father of my character after my uncle. We all have to name some of characters after the person we know. Even a fictional one.
faer-windstormfan Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey... I know you haven't worked on this in a long time, but I hope you write more.
Shinmoe Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014
Oh please, continue, this is awesome!
Commander--1 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
Brilliant, next chapter plz.
e2s86 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
next capter
wolfpieee Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Myyyy ppprrreeeeiiicciooouuusss. My PRECIUOSSSSSS.
Taelanus2-Icehawk Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013
Really good story line. Pls continue writing.
CliffTano Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
GAHH! the suspence is killing me, please make another chapter. and i cant see the song,(hear) and i really wanna know what it is.
Evaron Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I love the story. Keep Writing!
WrenWind Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this! ....But I can't find the rest of it anywhere else. Where do I look?
StarlightSorceress Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good chapter! But I can't listen to the song! What's the name?
lupus-miles Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't listen the song:O

what's it called, so I can look it up?

love the story btw!
Peppa91 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Student General Artist
This Story Needs to be made into a book, I know I'd read it!
shae-luvs-xei163 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so, when i start reading a book (or a story) i usually like it. but sometimes, i really, really, REALLY LOVE it! but that almost never happens. in fact it has only happened once. but THIS. oh man, i LOVE this story! i can't wait for more of it, im just so excited!!!
The-Livewriter Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012
Next chapter, please?
Spirit-of-Wolves Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
really GooD! :)
SilverandZuko Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Student General Artist
awwww!!!! that was sooo cuuute!!!
CaptainPiggie Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2011
how do you post stories?
GriffinPhillis Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You should finish this book and try to publish it!
b0bcat16 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
I agree its a wonderful story already!!
munlax Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011
I love this ^^ When do you think that the next chapter is gonna be out?
last1dogdemon Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
i cant wait until chapter 2 or are you still wrighting it :fingerscrossed:

with ones death brings new life
Lucario31697 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
omg that song was so beautiful. Listening to it and imagining a sad moment brought a tear to my eye... :tears:
WolfmelodyWolfmother Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011
Omg i love this book ! When you finish it you shold publish it totally !! Added to watch and Favs
BlackwolfLW Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011  Student Filmographer
Wheres the rest of the story?
nooby-banana Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011  Student Filmographer
Not written yet.
Holonboy Featured By Owner May 30, 2011
Is Grandpa William the same Will as the Will in the prologue that took place many years ago?
shae-luvs-xei163 Featured By Owner May 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*listens to song* ... MUST. FIND. ON. ITUNES!
albikyle Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011
wow truly awesome.this was really good,i have one question is this half written half comic?or what?
ApocalypticAngel4792 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011  Student Writer
I did enjoy chapter one. I can't wait for the rest!
goldendraco13 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2011
you have great writing skills, i really love this story so far <3
are you still writing it?
nooby-banana Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2011  Student Filmographer
Yeah, I plan to keep working on it eventually. I'm reworking it now though.
goldendraco13 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011
awesome ^^ glad its not been discontinued
lyratyto Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Omg , i just fell in love with this story , plz continue.
Last-Verse Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
is there a chapter 2? :eager:
Rashirou Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2010  Student Digital Artist
It's a really great story! I really enjoyed reading it!=D
And omg, so interesting too!
I hope you'll continue it someday.
SolrSurfr3 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're gonna keep working on this, right? Pleeeeaase? Between the Sneak Peak and this chapter, I'm already falling in love with Riley! And Maddy can be pretty tough when she wants to be. YOU GO, GIRL!!!
Weilderoflight Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2010
really good story will you continue it?
EmeraldRainDragon Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Great story :D. Will you be continuing it?
Whitedragon51 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010
An interesting story to be sure. When will the next chapter be up?
MoonaSpooks Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2010
This is great, very well written=) Love the comic you drew too, now I'll have to read. The name Riley's awesome:thumbsup:
lyokoluva123 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010
nooby-banana Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010  Student Filmographer
If you mean that it's very cheesy and sappy, then I agree. xD This part isn't even in the final draft, so I should probably take it down.
lyokoluva123 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2010
i don't think it's bad infact dragon's eye is one of my fave fanfic's and your video "the rescue" is perhapse THE best i've seen so far ^_^
Xiaahandrus Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Mah! I want chapter two followed by the next chapter and then the next and so on until the story is complete! This is very good and you are a very good writer.

There is innocence in the story on Riley and Maddy's parts, but it's written so that most anyone who enjoyed this sort of story would enjoy reading it. Again, this is very good.
TakeruDavis Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Lemme guess, grandpa W. is ///spoiler omited///
AleniaYuki Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
Chapter 2 D:?
nona49er Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2010
The song is perfect and yes it will be a tender moment theme song for Maddy and Riley.
DragonRiderofpower Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2010
That was really good, plz add more soon.
Pokewes Featured By Owner May 29, 2010
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